http://galwithglasses.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] galwithglasses.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] angelfeast 2011-09-15 02:54 am (UTC)

This is really good. Good choices on the memories and the flashback to Jess at the beginning and end along with all the yellow-eyes stuff in the middle. I'm going to want to read this again.
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