OMG, this. This is amazing. This is terrifying, and deeply unpleasant in many ways, but only the good ways. You really make the second-person present work! And I love the sense of unreality, that each fragment is a person but that they don't have a firm grasp on anything. Lucifer!Sam is the scariest Sam of all. I would quote those four paragraphs back at you, but I have nothing to add, other than that you've got some flawless writing here. Congratulations on being awesome writers!
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Date: 2011-08-28 06:39 am (UTC)Extra points for seamless co-authoring.